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Too afraid to fall asleep
Too afraid to shut my eyes
Too afraid to go to bed
Im too afraid that i may die

Im too afraid of all afraid of all i fear
Im too afraid of whats not there
I do not know if i will dream
When it takes me from here

Im far too frightened of the dark
I try to run fast from the light
I do not know if i will dream
I do not know if it will bite

i try my best to keep you clean
and keep you from my thoughts
i try to keep you far away
from feelings i have fought

but more you stumble deeper still
into the far back of my mind
The more it hurts, the more it kills
Im dreaming all the time

so now i push you far away
To silence all the screams
And now i sit here left to fray
And wander if ill dream


dont worry for me



Because im just dreaming
And your still here
Ill wake up fine
So do not fear
you can go on
Dont be afraid
You will wake up here
with me one day

And i get frightened
And we all do
But now im here
Im here with you
'Cause im just Dreaming
Ill wake up fine
And if i dont then know
I didnt mean to leave you behind
©2008-2009 ~theverybadman
:icontheverybadman:

Author's Comments

psycological remdition of Kafkaesque art.

this is part one of the dream seris thingy

part two = [link]

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:icongaaralover112:
OMG!!!
I love it!!
:glomp:

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I luv him! I know i do! Just please....dont take me from him.
:iconvbms-little-lilly:
i like it

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sometimes the sickness is the cure
:icon44darkmoon:
That was very enlighting, really good job again lol, keep writing its a joy to read them :)
:iconvampiremistress18:
LOVE LOVE
awesomeness

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"There is more money being spent on breast implants and Viagra than on Alzheimer's research. This means that by 2020, there should be a large elderly population with perky boobs and huge erections and absolutely no recollection of what to do with them."
:iconloving-firegoddess:
Your beginnings and endings are always perfect!
Just Phenominal.
Lol, I don't know if I'm just exaggerating, but I really did enjoy this one...alot actually.
Especially this part: I'm far too frightened of the dark
I try to run fast from the light.
It makes sense...yet it doesn't.
That part is hard for me to explain ^^;.
But it's like, you don't know whether or not he's dreaming, not even toward the very end. Atleast, I couldn't. Not sure if that's what you were trying to do.
It brought a smile to face, I must add. It literally made my day.
:iconcomputergeekoutofspa:
This is amazing!!!!

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For that I am what I am, if you ever loved me as,
I\'m just a shadow among many

-Stella
:icontcgamer:
awsome'z

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Under all of that fur or those scales your still you
:iconmillyxtali:
its nice i like the title of it,really fits the poem.great job^^

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