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I see you and the haze rises; the world fades away and your image burns into me.
I hold you in my arms and the world fades away and we are all that’s left.
Your warm embrace,
Your tender touch,
Your breath rolls over me as you reach your arms into my jacket and hold me tight. The world fades away and nothing can harm us, nothing can touch us, nothing can see us. I hold you tighter as the light shapes its way around us and molds us together in the shape of a heart.

I hold you closer and the world fades away.

You are the beauty that keeps me going,
You are the glory that keeps me on track,
You are the light that burns away the darkness,
You are the darkness that hides me from the light.

I’m driven every day by the force and the rush that I get when I hear those words, those words which stop my heart.
Those words which feed my soul,
The sweet and jovial sound,
The heavenly cry… the angelic chorus.
Every utterance of those words to me from you is a reflection of the perfection, and the heaven, we have created for one another.

Those words which can kill me,
Those words which bring me to life,
Those words which can heal me,
Those words which cause me to writhe.

Your lips move gently as they awaken things inside me I thought was dead. The words come out, flowing straight into my lungs, my breathing stops and my heart is content. Those words which storm over me eagerly like a wave and warm me as though they were light, those perfect words…

I love you

I entered into a world that hated me, I smiled,
A world that cherished me, I smiled,
A world that hurt me, I smiled,
A world that killed me, I smiled,
No matter where I enter, you waited for me to return.

The world can’t be trusted and neither can the people in it, the scorn of life and despair of people have given me a bitter view. No matter how nice I am things happen for the worst; no matter how hard I try I can’t stop the voices of the ones hating me. Nothing stays consistent except for you being there for me, it has become something I can trust and something I can divulge in; something that stays there like the stars to the sky. You provide me with this which I ask of you, and so much more I could never ask for.

I love you,
I love you… so very much.
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written as a valentine days gift for my angel of music. my lovely little lilly. my sweet destinii. oh oh oh how i love her so

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:iconamayasfantasy:
ooo wow!! I love music as you know... I love angels, as you know.. this is BEAUTIFUL! thanks for sharing it with me! :hug:

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In my own salvation
And your eternal slumber
Legend shall speak
Of sacrifice at world’s end
The wind sails over the water’s surface
Quietly, but surely
~ Loveless


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:iconverybadman:
it was my valentines day gift to my girlfriend = ) she said it brought a tear to her eyes

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"Please believe me when i say i love you."

<{January 18 2008}>
:iconamayasfantasy:
it was beautiful! You almost had me snifflin! lucky girl!

--
In my own salvation
And your eternal slumber
Legend shall speak
Of sacrifice at world’s end
The wind sails over the water’s surface
Quietly, but surely
~ Loveless


Please check out my novels at [link]
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:iconsk8ter-girrl24:
this is very nice and a beutiful poem it really touches the heart. ur an awesome poetry writer ur girlfiend must be proud!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ttyl
:iconcharmedsakura:
:cries: AWWWWWW!

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Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength; loving someone deeply gives you courage. --Leo-Tzu--
:iconnightdrym:
how lovely.I made me cry for hopes that I can feel hat ay someday.

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demon come
over here
twards the sound of clapping
lift your ear
can you hear
all the children laughing

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