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Malice, my dark mistress by ~theverybadman:icontheverybadman:





Her body moves rhythmically to the music surrounding
She glides through the crowd back and forth like the waves
Her eyes shift upon me
And im frozen, paralysed in my obsession

Her body moves slowly
As she shifts through the ocean
An ocean of brier corpses dancing around her
A sea of empty faces

Were in the land of the obscure
We walk the halls of the Necropolis
Were everyone is dreaming of the life they lost
Were everyone is dancing

They danced through this darkened place
The music of there suffering echoed
They flowed about like the sea, rushing against one another
They flowed through the air like bitter toxins

The crowd began to part and a icy chill crawl up my spine
She aproached me and my heart began to pound
She was the desire slowly killing me
She was fear keeping me alive

Her eyes are lit from the fire of her passion
Her heart is frozen from loveless chill
She passes silently through pandemonium
She breaks through the chaos shes submerged in

Her body weaves through the abyss
As the warmth of life is drawn from me
She advances slowly
Mon vie, consumed by her Malice

She embraces me
She depletes me
With her love she intoxicates me
And with her lust she leaves me
She leaves me lifeless,  

Left here in the dark drained of all life
Left here devoured by her love
Left here to fade into the sea of lost souls
Left here dancing

Everyone was dreaming
Everyone was dancing
©2008-2009 ~theverybadman
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Author's Comments

Mon de la vie = my life (its french)

goes with the photo found here --- > [link]

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:iconvbms-little-lilly:
its amazing. by far the best thing you have every written.

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:iconrdrose:
Hey Ben, It's Crippled Matt,

I really liked but I think you may want to spell-check unless it was on purpose.

Otherwise, good job.

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:iconundeadincaptivity:
it was great I loved the ending very well worded and I liked the way you described things, and the dreaming thing mustve been a very beautifull nightmare ^-^ the darknes and the and yet the beauty of just the party alone was amazing

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:iconninjadoggykibafan:
wow this was great u explained it with great detail i love it i think its the best thing by you ive read so far

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:iconvampiremistress18:
i must agree with Destinii this is by far the best you've ever written =D

i hope you don't mind my slight criticism lol =)

kks the whole time i was reading this i thought he/she was dreaming of death (death being the seductress) now im not entirely sure if thats what you were going for but if it is love must be changed to lust or something of the likes.

then i read the comments and people said it was describing love so i reread it and if thats what you were going for leave it as it is lol
awesome as always keep up the good work

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:icontheverybadman:
its meaning is yours and everyone's to decide. i had no meaning intended but to leave it open to your own imagination.
:iconanimemaster171:
You know, it's poets like you that refill my hope in the world of literature. This thing had me from the first line.

And only got better till the very end, and it's sudden ending kind of made me feel like I was the character in the poem. And I'm not just kissin' ass man. Good job.

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Wow. You have a gift with words, my friend.

Beautiful, yet deadly. I really like it.

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